Chelseam2

Very thought provoking and smooth. Although I don't agree with the part that we "just made God up", I thought it was very good. Now. Questions. If there is no ...

I love it. I really love your use of words. It makes you sound extremely talented and resourceful. It all flows smoothly together, and the reactions are very human. I ...

Nuuuuu! Don't fall asleep! =O I looooove this. Write more! ;D You fit motion into it very nicely. (Like, the car-ride.) And you are very good at human emotions and ...

Hello, I'm Chelseam2, and I shall be reviewing your story today. “Liam!” I yelp, pushing the bow sideways, making him miss. The girl looks up towards where we are in ...

I love it. It expresses the intended emotions beautifully, and it feels very genuine. It describes life, and how things work. (In a way. I will explain.) I see this ...

I really enjoyed it. You represented pain and consequence clearly, but also relief. ;D And, because I am a Grammar-freak (XD): "I quickly stood up embracing this person and I ...