Chasmira1060

I too don't see anything; hope you get it fixed though!

Truly beautiful! I'm sure your girlfriend will appreciate. I love the metaphor of you being the sun who helps her, the moon, to shine and thrive and grow. And the ...

A very sweet poem, and clever; at first I thought you might be speaking of the death of a child, but I really like the human-like qualities you give to ...

I really enjoyed reading this story; I always love tales that put a new twist on how something came to be. The title I thought was very clever, and I ...

Simple but lovely--and definitely speaks to a lot of us who have experienced unrequited love! I used to experience some of these symptoms over a guy I liked for seven ...

Brilliant! The writing is very good, and I feel as though you use a very literary style. I actually liked the lack of quotation marks; I thought perhaps you used ...

Truly intriguing! The table's bubbling is quirky--in a good way, I like unique things! I hope we later explore the friends' connections more, I found that interesting as well. I ...

Very intriguing start. At first, when her feet are washed in blood, I thought she had killed someone herself. But reading on, it becomes so much more interesting than that! ...

I find this piece quite brilliant. The language is very beautiful; I love how all the metaphors parallel her real life. At first, I felt like everything she was describing ...

Thanks very much, and glad you liked. It actually is a part of a longer work of mine, a book I've published called "The Silver Stag", but I like it ...

Beautiful language, lyrical and providing excellent visuals. Poetic even in its horror. Is this meant to reflect Snow White, by chance?

"A girl with sand-white skin strolled in the common. Tendrils of flaming auburn curls spilled from beneath a kerchief that was tied tightly about her head. She had fine, intelligent ...

Hullo, all! Please to meet you, and excited to be here; I love connecting with fellow authors! I've already uploaded a couple stories, so do check them out. I have ...

Very cool; I like pointillism, and I like the vibrant colors. This could provide excellent inspiration for a story; I can almost imagine a strange forest where the trees are ...

Wow, this is actually really brilliant! I love the first line: "The world wrinkled, sending waves of light across the air like ripples in water." The description here is beautiful ...