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Chasmira1060

  • Lounge, The Re: Best Zelda of All Time

    So, who here plays Zelda, and what's your fave of all time? Personally, Ocarina of Time was my first and thus fave Zelda game--the story, characters, side quests, the intricacy ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Do you think Harry Potter is the LotR of Low fantasy?

    I agree they are kind of hard to compare. Both have become timeless, in their own rites. Lord of the Rings does have a much higher quality of writing and ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Sequels?

    Oh, yes, I write sequels! Lol, usually without meaning to. I've written so many books I intend to be singles, but, as you say, the characters bug you to continue ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: What are teens into these days?

    I too love fantasy--thus I am a fantasy author. I agree with what others have said in this thread--be yourself, be unique. I have never tried to write just to ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: How do you go about planning a novel ?

    Wow. So this is one of those things you don't really ever think about HOW you do it, lol! But let's see... Well, I guess I often draw first inspirations ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Help Marketing Book

    Hi, all. Just published my first novel. Well, correct that--I've self-published several books in print and ebook format, and the ebooks have actually sold several copies, so I'm please with ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Mirror Girl

    Brilliant imagery. A mournful story but beautifully told. Thanks for sharing!

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: It Means Nothing (version two)

    Extremely powerful. Wonderful imagery, especially towards the very end. This scrolled before me like a movie, I could picture it all in my head, much as with my novel Bloodmaiden, ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Seasonless

    Sorry, remembered a couple of small changes. First of all: "All she wanted now was for the darkness of death to to wrap her in the blanket of darkness" I ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Seasonless

    Brilliant and captivating! i was hooked from the start by your description of the forest, comparing the autumn leaves to fire; I also felt the fire representative of the dying ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: One Thousand One Maidens: Part 2

    He blinked in the bright moonlight and stood dazed. Shops surrounded him, lining the quiet street. At first, he panicked; had something happened to her? Something so terrible he was ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: One Thousand One Maidens: Part 1

    He has slain his one thousand maidens, where he might have saved them. The cloak of passage now flows from his shoulders. A river of pure rubies faceted from their ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Eliza and Morgan (2)

    Aside from the grammatical fixes which others have pointed out, this was again a great read! I love how you describe her emotions. Thanks for this, and look forward to ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Regret Letters (formally know as Eliza and Morgan)

    This is truly brilliant, some of the best writing I have read on this and similar writer's websites! Your writing is simple yet beautiful, with lovely imagery that made it ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: "Why do I love" you.

    Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant; after reading the first metaphor, I intended to quote and commend how well it works; but reading the whole poem, there are too many excellent metaphors to ...

    Jun 18, 2010


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson