Charm

Okay thanks. I'll have to reread and find those mistakes

Hey! This is pretty good and I liked it. I think you should call it a song in options because I don't think this is a poem (unless I'm confused?) ...

I'll try to get to it but I'm busy.

I didn't get double...

Thanks for this review and no it's not based on my cruise xD The only thing that is the same is the setting.

Haha I'm glad you liked the chapter, Mary Jane (now I know your name hahahahaha!)

Aww thanks. This chapter needs a lot of work though, haha.

That's fine xD Thanks again for the review

Thanks :)

Thanks Writer. I really need to work on this chapter. I was really disappointed in myself :/ I need to add imagery and some more jazz. I need to make ...

Same xD

Thanks for this review. I was really tired when I wrote this and I thought it wouldn't hurt to publish it. I need to add imagery and some jazz xD

Yeah I know but it still makes me feel like really bad :/ Anyway I might need more help with finding places where I'm telling and not showing. I 'fixed' ...

Thanks for this review. I totally understand the show not tell. I was having such a hard time writing this and I still feel really badly about it. I'm going ...

You're welcome. I understand I don't have a lot who care either but that just makes the ones who do even more special. Gosh I sound like I'm in a ...