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Thanks so much for this review! It wasn't harsh at all and I found it super helpful. There is still a lot of ways I can improve xD

Thanks so much for this review. It was super helpful! :D

Also Elodie does have flaws. It's very hard to bring them out in the beginning chapters but I have hinted at them. Multiple times. Her flaws are: Wrath, despair, self-destruction, ...

Thanks for the advice

Thanks for this review! I was and still am having a hard time writing Lilou because her and Elodie are not supposed to like each other :P

Thanks so much for this review!

Thank you :) My novel is on YWS, it's called Elodie Bones if you are interested.

Thanks for this comment, though I think you got the meaning behind my poem wrong. It relates to my novel about a man meeting a woman by the beach. He ...

Thanks so much for this review!!! :D

Okay :D Thanks

Thanks for this review! I'm going to go into greater detail now of the man. I going to give him a crooked nose as if it was broken and healed ...

Thank you for this review. And my novel is on YWS:

Thanks for this review :)

Thanks kitty