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Thanks for this review. In the description of the poem I wrote, "Honestly don't really care that my rhyme is inconsistent. It's a metaphor for the person this poem is ...

hahah thanks

I don't think so :P Honestly I didn't write it for her to see it. I wrote it to help me get over it

Thank you

Thanks :)

Thanks :)

Hahaha you could say that xD

True ^^

Oh and the first poem I ever wrote is on YWS and is soooooo bad. It's also a rant xD it's called "I would kill myself" xD and to be ...

Thanks for this review xD When I'm upset I get very salty and I write salty poems. Usually I don't publish them but I felt like publishing this one xD

Thanks for the review!

I should! Thanks for the suggestion! :)

No problem :)

Everything that I mentioned can be fixed and quite easily. If you need my help or advice, you can always PM me or find me on chat :)

Aw I didn't mean it like that. I just mean it needs some work. All things need work, all things can become better. It's my job as a reviewer to ...