Charm

Some of your points were good and helpful but you made a few of incorrect assumptions about the story and used that to base your criticism. I'm not upset but ...

I didn't really find this review helpful. I'd really wish you'd at least read the first two chapters (though the first chapter is one sentence). All you advice either didn't ...

Thanks so much for this review! I'll totally keep in mind all the points you make in the future. I do think that I use "ing" words a lot so ...

Thanks c:

if only this could happen to me

Yeah thanks! I actually just got inspired and wrote a poem I really love. I'm going to wait a bit before posting it though!

*every poem I write

I've actually been working on this poem for awhile. I have quite a few poems that are in the process of being made and edited. I don't particularly like this ...

Yeah I get that c: I hope things that better for you and whoever this poem was about.

That's fine! I totally get that xD I usually don't edit really personal poems no matter what any reviewer says just because they were meant to be all that they ...

Thanks!

BICH I SWEAR TO GOD IF YOU TAKE YOONGI FROM ME (no this is just some weird romance story i've been thinking of) YOONGI IS MINE BINE CASH ME OUSSIDE ...

No problem!

what about the other ones >.> (jk but kind of ouch JK)