Charm

Thanks Steggy!

thanks!

Thanks Shey! I thought I'd try something new and I actually really hate rhyming because it's kind of restricting. This was very hard for me to write xD

Thank you for your review

Thank you so much!

I love this! The first stanza is my favorite. I love the line of cigarette smoke, open windows, and car next to me. I really, really love the line about ...

I was writing off of my own experience and literally no one i knew knew an eclipse was coming until a few days before. Thanks for correcting me though. I'll ...

It's sort of an angry poem. My biggest priority was writing a poem with good imagery and sort of violent imagery and words. I don't want the reader to feel ...

Thanks for your review! So do you think I should change it so that it says, "you stitch me up" or something like that. You were right about how there ...

Thank you for the compliment! I'm just telling you because I know I've discussed how irritating it can be to hear things like "You should capitalize your I's" with other ...

thank you for your review! capitalization is not necessary in poetry. grammar is not necessary in poetry. when critiquing poetry it's better to refrain from making comments about the poet's ...

Thanks for your input it's really helpful hearing what people think! Juno and Margo aren't canon (though I love seeing them shipped together). It's just part of Juno personality and ...

awweeee

*thanks one million times*

thanks Lauren! i'm not big on patterns or rhyming in general. most of things are for aesthetic and the gaps are for emphasis when speaking the poem out loud, like ...