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Re: buried things
Thanks for the review!
Dec 9, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 22 (final ch of part 1)
Thanks! I definitely need to fix my grammar. I was just wondering if there were any plot issues and things like that. Thanks so much for your help c:
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 22 (final ch of part 1)
Thanks for reviewing this so quickly! What did you mean when you said to improve on dialogue? Should there be more of it? Does it need be more natural and ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 21
Thanks for this review! I knew it was rushed but I'm not sure how to fix it right now.
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 20
Thank you!
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 20
Thanks! They're both sixteen.
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 19
Thanks for reviewing this chapter! Margo is the main character and the story is told by her but the entire story revolves around Juno and Margo's "obsession" with her.
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: worthless
thanks!
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 20
Thanks!
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 21
Thanks for the help this was a hard chapter to write
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: nesting
thank you!
Nov 15, 2017 -
Re: worthless
thank you so much
Nov 14, 2017 -
Re: worthless
thanks!
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 19
thanks for this review! i've been having trouble writing recently so i've written like a sentence a day which tends to ruin the flow :/ i'm trying to get into ...
Nov 12, 2017 -
Re: she.
i love it
Nov 11, 2017
