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Re: My YWS Addiction
hehehe. I know right! This poem so deserves the spotlight.
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: My YWS Addiction
I don't think Chrisy was trying to get likes. She was simply writing a poem about how she was feeling and it so happened to be about her feelings towards ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Daddys Greif
Still changing this to short story isn't right because this isn't a short story. Also I understand that he is young but young children can still form basic sentences (that ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: If you knew me
Thanks :3 Sorry to make you cry, haha. I just hate to see people like this. No one is alone. Not in a world this big.
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Also I never said that he wasn't unattractive: "It wasn%u2019t the fact that he was an attractive person"
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
I totally understand and you're fine. I can take the harsh critiques xD I'm having a hard time describing the ship because it's just you know a ship. Anyway I ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Thank you! That means a lot
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Thank you so much for this review. I agree with a lot of what you've said.
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
I totally understand. I don't come to YWS to get praise I come here to get critique on my work. I just felt like I needed to explain some things.
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Hmm. I don't know why my quote messed up like that. Here it is again: "Don't worry. It's only eight days"
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Thanks for this review. I have to admit I disagree with a lot you've said in this review. Vivienne has always had a fear of the ocean and I've hinted ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Thanks for this review. I'm sad to hear my descriptions weren't good I thought these were my best :/
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Thank Writer!! I'm glad you liked it :3
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Thanks and sorry for the typos. I suck at editing.
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: When it was you, me, and the sea
I came here to review but oh my gawd. This needs to review (in my opinion). It reminded me of my story Reverie. Aw this is so sad and beautiful ...
Feb 15, 2016
