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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: My YWS Addiction

    hehehe. I know right! This poem so deserves the spotlight.

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: My YWS Addiction

    I don't think Chrisy was trying to get likes. She was simply writing a poem about how she was feeling and it so happened to be about her feelings towards ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Script » Realistic, Other Re: Daddys Greif

    Still changing this to short story isn't right because this isn't a short story. Also I understand that he is young but young children can still form basic sentences (that ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: If you knew me

    Thanks :3 Sorry to make you cry, haha. I just hate to see people like this. No one is alone. Not in a world this big.

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Also I never said that he wasn't unattractive: "It wasn%u2019t the fact that he was an attractive person"

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    I totally understand and you're fine. I can take the harsh critiques xD I'm having a hard time describing the ship because it's just you know a ship. Anyway I ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Thank you! That means a lot

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Thank you so much for this review. I agree with a lot of what you've said.

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    I totally understand. I don't come to YWS to get praise I come here to get critique on my work. I just felt like I needed to explain some things.

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Hmm. I don't know why my quote messed up like that. Here it is again: "Don't worry. It's only eight days"

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Thanks for this review. I have to admit I disagree with a lot you've said in this review. Vivienne has always had a fear of the ocean and I've hinted ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Thanks for this review. I'm sad to hear my descriptions weren't good I thought these were my best :/

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Thank Writer!! I'm glad you liked it :3

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    Thanks and sorry for the typos. I suck at editing.

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When it was you, me, and the sea

    I came here to review but oh my gawd. This needs to review (in my opinion). It reminded me of my story Reverie. Aw this is so sad and beautiful ...

    Feb 15, 2016


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