z
  • Home

Young Writers Society


CharlotteS

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Fauve

    Hello! Charlotte just dropping in to give a quick (If not a little late) review. Firstly, I did enjoy this. I could just see the town and the girl who ...

    Jun 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Love And Hate (Edit)

    This was a very interesting poem. I am learning about the world wars at the moment so it was strange to find a poem on war. But, moving on. Firstly ...

    Jun 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: A wounded soldier

    Hi! Charlotte dropping in for a quick review. Firstly, wow! The rhyming scheme for this was amazing! I love poems that rhyme and your one did, so of course I ...

    Jun 27, 2017

  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Love art

    Hey! Charlotte dropping in for a review. This was an interesting piece. I like the story line and the description of Kei. There are a few nit-picks though. Firstly, as ...

    Jun 26, 2017

  • Poetry » Humor, Satire
    Re: modern sonnet.

    Hey! Thought I would check this out because it's a modern sonnet and they can be quite unusual. Anyway, I liked this. It was confusing to begin with but after ...

    Jun 25, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Historical Fiction
    Re: Thief of my heart: Chapter 1

    Hey there! Charlotte popping in for a review. Firstly, I would like to say that this piece was very interesting. It kept me captivated until the very end and it ...

    Jun 25, 2017

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General
    Re: My Name Is *New*

    hey, Charlotte right here for a review. WOW. This was very honest. I love honest writing. To tell the world that you have depression and anorexia is brave. I love ...

    May 8, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 9

    HI! It's Charlotte here for a review. I was confused when this began. I haven't read any other chapters but this did interest me. I would suggest making the beginning ...

    May 8, 2017

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
    Re: Darkness Becomes Me

    What's up? Charlotte here for a review. This was interesting. You classed it as a novel/chapter but there doesn't seem to be much of a novel there. This is short ...

    May 5, 2017

  • Short Story » Satire, Health
    Re: Writer's Block (Edited)

    Hello. This is Charlotte dropping by for a review. Well, this was chilling. I swear it's every writers fear to be bombarded and then locked away by the terrible Writers ...

    May 5, 2017

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
    Re: Ghosts

    Hey, Charlotte here for a review. I must say the beginning of this didn't catch my interest until the second paragraph. Starting with the tour guide droning on about a ...

    May 5, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Strangers- chapter one

    Nice. I really liked this. Your characters problems were real and many could probably relate to it. However that is where the realism ends. It is unlikely that someone with ...

    May 3, 2017

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: One Look

    This was amazing! I loved your story line. The person you loved who no longer cares for you. It is heart wrenching and draws the readers in. People can relate ...

    May 2, 2017

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction
    Re: I barely got out in time

    Well, I really liked this. I have been considering writing a murder story but wasn't sure how to do so. If violence would be acceptable. This was a perfect example ...

    May 2, 2017

  • Other » Review, Humor
    Re: Divergent- A poetic diatribe.

    Well. I must say I'm not too sure what to say about this. I am as big a book critique as the next person but I am also a book ...

    May 2, 2017


Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something.
— Plato