Charllotte4

I love the way you intergrated everything. It flowed very well! I entered too, and out of the few I've read I think this is the most original... I think ...

Love it! The atmosphere created is effective and your grammar and spelling is good also :)

I love this!!! Your grammar is very good and I love your writing style. I can't really see much that needs improving...

Wow! I like this! It's really good :) I've just entered the contest also...

The iridescent light from the moon shone through the small window of the obscure chamber. I reluctantly forced myself to enter, not knowing what I would encounter. My breath was ...

My favourite part: I'm strugglingagainst manacles,which bind meand render me helplessas the earth splits apartfrom in front of me,craggy and uneven,secluding Mom and Ion our own little island. I actua

I LOVE THIS!!! I really like the use of poetic technique and the fact that I can readily connect and empathize with the persona

I really like this song, overall it's very good. Your grammar does appear a little bit awkward in places, and your use of words could be simplified for a better ...

WOW! This is really good. You have a creative imagination and your grammar seems in order. I love it because you captivated me as a reader and enticed me to ...

The light of the early morning sun cascaded down onto the vast fields that yielded no more than sparse blades of grass. Dawn was rapidly approaching. Clouds heavy with the ...