Charliebo

Thank you all very much for your fab comments! I thought for the sake of others who may or may not read this, i'd explain it a little more. I ...

thanks. :) Although, i just wrote high-calibre because i'm from britain, and we spell words wierdly over here!

excellent!!

hello... this is a somewhat... belated reply to Cade's comment, as i think that it's important to highlight for anyone that might read this poem sometime. Basically, i can see ...

Oh, and also, it's not heaven or hell - they're just dead. I was really wondering whether perhaps everybody meets once they die... i dunno, it made lots of sense ...

hello! I thought there were a few cliches in there that are, quite frankly, dangerous, but overall, this poem seems original. Well done. But definately watch out for the cliches. ...

Big thanks to all of those who have commented on this piece - it's amazing when you realise how impartial and constructive views can make such a huge difference to ...

thanks for the suggestions. after reading your comment, i realised that there were a lot of things that i have not made obvious about the poem, it's meanings and the ...

k guys, this was simply scribbled in a pensive moment, so don't take it to be anything proffessional - it was literally just a thought. But criticism is (almost) always ...

Thanks a bunch - very constructive, though i'm afraid i haven't decided to scrap the entire first stanza; i'm too atatched to it! However, i really apreciate your comments and ...

Thanks! ^^

My god! It's genius! It flowed like a dream and the words were well chosen. I am pleased to say that i have no critisism! ^^

Wow! Super coool! seriously, this is what poetry is about, isn't it? Writing what the hell you want in a lyrical way and just being expressive through rhythm and words! ...

sorry if it came off as there for the rhyming, but i specifically wanted to use the word unsmelt - the whole poem is to illustrate the fact that music ...