Charles

Neat!! I don't get what's up with the ruby though. What was with that? When you write the next bit I'd like to know what that was all about. 8)

First off; I'm a bit disappointed with whoever it was that said "It sucked." In perspective, some writers can purposely make mistakes in order to variate certain elements of a ...

I didn't read the whole story, but I read the first few chapters; enough to get an overview of your plot. Not any grammatical mistakes anyway; but my writing technique ...