CharcoalFeather

First off, I want to thank you both for your reviews, I was shocked by the incredible depth of Esmé's sentence by sentence. It was what this story probably needed, ...

First off, I want to thank you both for your reviews, I was shocked by the incredible deph of Esmé's sentence by sentence. It was what this story probably needed, ...

First off, I want to thank you both for your reviews, I was shocked by the incredible deph of Esmé's sentence by sentence. It was what this story probably needed, ...

Esmé your not the first persone who was confuzzled by the intro to the chapter, It does need major structure change, so I guess we can work with that before ...

I know as your reading this, you don’t want to hear a normal story. That’s because you picked up this book, and thought well what a cute cover, a boy ...

I have to add something quick. I was a little confused in the way this story was set up. The designation of the too diffrent characther's paths converging caught me ...

This is a truly interesting and intriguing story. I'm rather new to the forums, so you may have other work I might have missed, but this is very well written, ...

------------------------------------------------ Author's Note: This story is in extreme rough draft. I have four more chapters to post, but decided that each one would benefit from individual review

Hmmm... what do I think of when I think of an introduction? Why is it the first thing that pops into my mind whenever I think of introductions is something ...