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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Memories of a "Brighter" Past

    Editted to fix all of the little nit-picky things. As well, I added in *** every time there was a dramatic time change to make it easier to understand (I ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Memories of a "Brighter" Past

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Memories of a "Brighter" Past

    Came back to see two new reviews, wow! I guess I have a lot of work to do. To explain the story, we were asked to base it off of ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Memories of a "Brighter" Past

    Thanks for the review, and i'll see that the problems are worked out. Thanks again!

    Oct 4, 2014


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