Channon

Thanks Abigail. =D

Ignore inkwell. Well done, it's very good. =D Dissect your main idea of every line, then find the perfect precise wording to describe it. Keep it simple, don't use words ...

Your good with tension. At the end I was like *phew*. It's very interesting. Well done. =]

I have noticed that writers at YWS enjoy very serious poems. Don't get me wrong, they are all very good. I thought I'd take my chances with a nonsense poem. ...

Simple, to the point. Very true. The last part is my favourite by far. Stay away from cliche phrases like wing spreading and flying away. I wish it was longer. ...

You've got me down like a winter chill. Only for you there are beats in my heart. Not even the snow could our blossom kill. The paling cold doesn't change ...

Thanks.

Wow. Just Wow. :smt038 -Channon :smt043

Hey there!! :smt039 :smt039 :smt039 It was really good, it was cute.. maybe you intended it to have a deeper feeling :?: :?: Lots of people can relate to that.. ...

When life's music starts to dwindle. Whence the hearts and souls divine, has become to a thieve a mere swindle. The compassion for others, becomes a crime. Ignorance is bliss, ...

I caught my sister Blowing Bubbles. :D

Incredible rhythm.. I would love to hear this sung. The only part that I didn't like was repeating the things you said. The content is amazing, at the places it ...

I am busy writing this for my best friend. So i am afraid that a lot if it will not make sense. But please review it anyway, tell me if ...

Okay, maybe I just didn't find this mind blowing because I cant wallow for something so small for so long. Have you read the Book Thief by Markus Zusack? The ...

Time smells like books, and dust and new shoes Time smells like babies, elders and wood Time smells like new house, velvet and glue Time smells like leather and cotton ...