Earthquake
Passages I need help with for putting together my first novel.
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Earthquake Setting Description Excerpt
Help me to see if I wrote the setting description well!
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Earthquake Chapter 1 rewritten and re-approached.
Take a chance on Jay and Sirena, I have a feeling you'll fall in love.
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Earthquake Chapter 2 Revised and Shortened
Read Chapter 1 Rewritten and Reapproached before you read this. And please do, I think you'll fall in love.