ChadJ

Once again. very nice job. Total twist at the end . Keep it up this I hope this continues to be as entertaining as this chapter has been. Woot! Have ...

Hehe real witty and well written. The character of the dragon is devious but at the same time very likable, and we don't know what to think about the boy ...

This seems very poetic to me. It has a definite tension especially with you using the precise measurements of seconds (and just because seconds seem to be a meaningless and ...

Like it, very frank and forthright. I can definitely relate to this and know how your feeling (for the most part). Not much of a poetry guy myself but you ...

Whoa, intergalactic trippiness. Very vivid and cool diction, felt like I was floating through the ether. I have this image in my mind of these eldritch kind of gods dormant ...

“Time to die.” “Fuck, what?” James glanced over at his diminutive friend, then grinned with sharp teeth. “I don't know, just wanted to say that.” The air was thick and ...

Wow really cool. The moment that you said Kronos I was set on Greek mythology, but this seems to be in a league almost unto its own. Its great how ...

Awesomely morbid and macabre stuff here. It seems like you have a good concept, but you might want to hone and refine it some more. Additionally just make sure to ...

This seems like a good prologue for a novel etc. The whole mood of this is a kind of tense waiting for what's going to happen next, and it made ...

Pretty awesome, I must admit. Very disturbing and strange sterile ambiance here. I think its interesting that the woman is not only darker skinned than usual, but has wings. It ...

Nice work man, the atmosphere fitted the circumstances and what was going on. Although I would have liked to get in scene more (for the most part I felt as ...

“Get up man, get up!” I bellowed into Marvin's ears as I stuck his neck with the syringe and injected the stam fluid into his rushing bloodstream. His dull gaze ...

Hey guys I was recommended to this site by Psudoname (I think that's how to spell it) competent writer, always looking for improvement.