Centurion

Very good piece. I have never been good with romantic stuff, especially with reviewing it. But you did a good job conveying different thoughts and emotions. Word usage was spot ...

I liked this piece. One thing that stuck out to me was the smooth transition between ideas and different images.Overall, well done! The piece gives really strong emotions and thoughts ...

I really liked this piece. The writing style is similar to mine,very detailed and very smooth with parallel action. You had a very good opening and the substance of the ...

Even though it was short, I really enjoyed this piece. I liked the beginning it was strong and I could hear my inner narrator saying every word. The spaces in ...