Caytlin

this is really well writen, and a good plot too! your doing great with this, i was only able to spot a few very minor typos. keep writing, ~Caytlin

ohh!! i like this. it has enough info mixed with the perfect amount of suspense that instatly hooks a reader. i, for one, am hooked. do you have any other ...

for a title i would suggest adding something to Music. Musical Expression Silent Music Speaking Music Music Speaks or so on... story is very good so far :)

woah... this is great! definitely a story worth continuing.