Caytlin

this is really well writen, and a good plot too! your doing great with this, i was only able to spot a few very minor typos. keep writing, ~Caytlin

Close your eyes. Think of someone you love, someone you have loved, or someone you just have a crush on. Think of what you would do with them. how would ...

ohh!! i like this. it has enough info mixed with the perfect amount of suspense that instatly hooks a reader. i, for one, am hooked. do you have any other ...

“What is the next planet to document?” Asked a man who worked for Interplanetary Relations. “They call it Earth.” replied another. “Form of government?” he asked. “Unknown.” “Dominan

for a title i would suggest adding something to Music. Musical Expression Silent Music Speaking Music Music Speaks or so on... story is very good so far :)

woah... this is great! definitely a story worth continuing.