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Re: Teenage Chameleon
I seem to think I must be like her Delicate, patient, pleasant, She’s never said an ill word of anyone. Her inner beauty shines through her pores. And here am ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: My Master's Wrath
My heart pounds as I wait for his anger to lash out, Angrily, whipping my soft flesh until no more remains His blazing eyes lay upon me, “Dammed, girl…” His ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: My Master's Wrath
My heart pounds as I wait for master's wrath to lash out, Angrily, whipping my soft flesh until no more remains His blazing eyes lay upon me, “Dammed, girl…” The ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: They didn't know
If only there was such a way, For him to know my heart How desperately my weary soul longs For us to never be apart But the most unbearable of ...
Nov 30, 2007 -
Re: alone (horror) (edited)
--Then, all at once, they stopped. The shadow released Karen's neck, and she dropped to the floor, coughing. The shadows ran, disappearing into the night. -- I think you should ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Deleted
Just so you know, I ADORED this part... -It amazing how fast the cops will believe something her, especially if you have lots of money. Things had to end with ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Don't leave the cabin...
The eight high school honor students sat in the van on their way to a weekend ski trip their school ‘group’ won for raising the most money at a fundraiser. ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Dead Gamble
I always love four-line poetry... but the only reason I knew what it was about was because of the title... not sure if you wanted it that way, if so; ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Soon, So Soon
In my way of thinking, you should only put "Soon so soon", once in each stanza (I'd suggest the beginging...) . That would make it a bit easier to read. ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: New Here
I like writing poetry & short stories... yeah, I've got alot of work to do.
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: New Here
Yeah hey I'm Cat.... really hoping to improve my writing, it's not that good at the moment... Anyway, HI.
Nov 28, 2007
