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Catriona

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Teenage Chameleon

    I seem to think I must be like her Delicate, patient, pleasant, She’s never said an ill word of anyone. Her inner beauty shines through her pores. And here am ...

    Jan 7, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Master's Wrath

    My heart pounds as I wait for his anger to lash out, Angrily, whipping my soft flesh until no more remains His blazing eyes lay upon me, “Dammed, girl…” His ...

    Dec 10, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Master's Wrath

    My heart pounds as I wait for master's wrath to lash out, Angrily, whipping my soft flesh until no more remains His blazing eyes lay upon me, “Dammed, girl…” The ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: They didn't know

    If only there was such a way, For him to know my heart How desperately my weary soul longs For us to never be apart But the most unbearable of ...

    Nov 30, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: alone (horror) (edited)

    --Then, all at once, they stopped. The shadow released Karen's neck, and she dropped to the floor, coughing. The shadows ran, disappearing into the night. -- I think you should ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Deleted

    Just so you know, I ADORED this part... -It amazing how fast the cops will believe something her, especially if you have lots of money. Things had to end with ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Don't leave the cabin...

    The eight high school honor students sat in the van on their way to a weekend ski trip their school ‘group’ won for raising the most money at a fundraiser. ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Dead Gamble

    I always love four-line poetry... but the only reason I knew what it was about was because of the title... not sure if you wanted it that way, if so; ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Soon, So Soon

    In my way of thinking, you should only put "Soon so soon", once in each stanza (I'd suggest the beginging...) . That would make it a bit easier to read. ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Here

    I like writing poetry & short stories... yeah, I've got alot of work to do.

    Nov 29, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Here

    Yeah hey I'm Cat.... really hoping to improve my writing, it's not that good at the moment... Anyway, HI.

    Nov 28, 2007


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart