Catalyst

Thanks for the response! I'm not sure what it was that confused you in particular, so if you could elaborate that would be much appreciated. Also, I'll be fixing some ...

Whoops, very sorry, I got you mixed up with another story, so this doesn't apply! Sorry about that, I'll be more careful in the future. (Man, I'm full of mistakes ...

Well, following story-telling-101, this seems like a good time for an inciting incident to occur. Basically, if you don't know, that's the event that kick-starts the rest of the book, ...

Thank-you very much! I appreciate it! By the way, that grammar pointer at the beginning, I think it still works, but thanks for pointing it out, I'll watch that in ...

Whoops, didn't see that little grammar mistake, thanks for the pointers. It will become clearer as the story goes on (as the main point is to have chronology a little ...

Thank-you very much for the review! We'll see how that opinion holds up in the future. Here's a clue- It most likely won't. Anyway, I'll be sure to return the ...

Looks like an interesting new series, I look forward to reading more. By the way, just a tip when writing characters thoughts, you should write them in italic text (CTRL ...