Catalyn

No, you're right. Something is off with the rhythm of the 3rd stanza. Any suggestions as to how I might fix that?

Sonnets are difficult to change when they've already been written. The easiest way to change that line would be for me just to rewrite the first stanza, but I really ...

I wasn't quite sure how to mark stanzas, so thanks for the help! (And I'll try out extending that line for the sake of flow)

I'm pretty sure woods to wood was just a typo. I'll change out the 'they' and the 'tugging at my heart.' Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback. I think I'm going to keep 'darkness every place' just because it fits the rhythm better-it has the same number of syllables right now as the ...

Thanks! I'm pretty sure that's the reaction I was trying to get. This poem came from a dark sonnet competition between me and my friends, so it was written for ...