Cassie143

Hi, i really liked your poem. Its different to what i usually like to read but i still enjoyed every bit of it :) there was one part though were ...

the three little pigs ;)

hi cassie here, i liked it but i agree with danny ^ i dont really understand this poetry. but it was good :)

Firstly I would like to say that this was a very intriguing piece i like how you went into the hole getting called into the principals office and going to ...

your poem is fantastic i love it! there are a couple of parts that don’t flow and nicely as the rest but other than that is was great i personally ...

thanks heaps guys :]

great work its worded so truthfully i liked the lines Between the lines Our hopes are killed By cruel words And betraying faces you're a really good writer so keep ...

When you died it occurred to me That God is one of many unsolved mysteries His motives unknown And reasons unfair He had no right to take you up there ...

Thanks heaps I will definitely fix up those mistakes :)

Wow that's one amazing piece of poetry!! so much meaning and emotion you have talent, keep writing. i especially liked the lines what do the doctors think of me? am ...

Evil knocks on the door Through the peephole you see his grin Scary and wide Evil has nothing to hide. You’re the only one that can see him, You scream. ...

This was really good, I liked it a lot. I can easily relate to this I loved how it was worded I think that it rhymed perfectly I absolutely loved ...

i loved it it was funny and a great read :)

This was a very interesting piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading. It was very unique and I liked how you described the zombie falling apart.