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This is beautiful! I'm not sure if this is inspired by emotion you've felt previously or by other people or by your pure imagination, but it's amazing. I, too, like ...

I think this is adorable! I love the way you used some rhyme and some half-rhyme. Your grammar is slightly lacking in some places. Like "wanted to but unable to ...

Aww thank you! You're so sweet! I hope you enjoyed it!

I used my colons in the way I did for one reason: It made the reader remember it. The colons caught your attention/stuck in your mind. That was the goal.

I write for the people that have depression.. I'd like to thank you for openly saying that because so many people hold that in. My outlet for my emotions is ...