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Re: Confessions Of A Former Boy Scout
This piece was great! Very funny and informative about just how unhealthy Girls Scout cookies really are! My only critique is that the formatting is a bit difficult to read ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: The Afterparty
Your style of writing is descriptive without being flowery, which I like. I really enjoyed the entire story overalll, and in no way did it feel rushed! My only complaint ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Forgetting Names
Your story was very well-written, flowing very smoothly and was easy to get into. I like the power of writing theme you used in your story, but I'm a little ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Love Made Us Human
Hi there :) This is the first review I've ever written for YWS, so I hope its helpful to you in some way! First off I would like to say ...
Jun 16, 2011
