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Re: Confessions Of A Former Boy Scout
This piece was great! Very funny and informative about just how unhealthy Girls Scout cookies really are! My only critique is that the formatting is a bit difficult to read ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: The Afterparty
Your style of writing is descriptive without being flowery, which I like. I really enjoyed the entire story overalll, and in no way did it feel rushed! My only complaint ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Words of a Lost Father
Words of a Lost Father By Cassandra Mazza You looked to me for inspiration And sadly, you found none You flourished in my resignation Not knowing you were my son ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Forgetting Names
Your story was very well-written, flowing very smoothly and was easy to get into. I like the power of writing theme you used in your story, but I'm a little ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Love Made Us Human
Hi there :) This is the first review I've ever written for YWS, so I hope its helpful to you in some way! First off I would like to say ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Her Name is Peace
Her Name is Peace By Cassandra Mazza See her flying through the sky In the clouds so very high Can you find her in the stars? Hear her laughter in ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: My Eternal Mind
Cassandra Mazza My Eternal Mind I have isolated myself from my friends, my family, and from life. I have had no death in my wake, no event in my time ...
Jun 16, 2011
