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CassandraMazza

  • General Articles Re: Confessions Of A Former Boy Scout

    This piece was great! Very funny and informative about just how unhealthy Girls Scout cookies really are! My only critique is that the formatting is a bit difficult to read ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Afterparty

    Your style of writing is descriptive without being flowery, which I like. I really enjoyed the entire story overalll, and in no way did it feel rushed! My only complaint ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Words of a Lost Father

    Words of a Lost Father By Cassandra Mazza You looked to me for inspiration And sadly, you found none You flourished in my resignation Not knowing you were my son ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Forgetting Names

    Your story was very well-written, flowing very smoothly and was easy to get into. I like the power of writing theme you used in your story, but I'm a little ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Love Made Us Human

    Hi there :) This is the first review I've ever written for YWS, so I hope its helpful to you in some way! First off I would like to say ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Her Name is Peace

    Her Name is Peace By Cassandra Mazza See her flying through the sky In the clouds so very high Can you find her in the stars? Hear her laughter in ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Eternal Mind

    Cassandra Mazza My Eternal Mind I have isolated myself from my friends, my family, and from life. I have had no death in my wake, no event in my time ...

    Jun 16, 2011


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