CaseySaz

Hi there! I've written a general kind of short story and I'd be really grateful if you could review it for me.:) Here's the link: Thanks a ton! Casey

Thanks so much for reviewing everybody! Fight4whatisright - Thanks for the praise, it really means a lot:) I totally see what you mean with the speech. I'll fix that up. ...

Hi there! I've written a short story and it'd be great if you could review it for me:) Here's the link: Thanks! Casey

Hi there! I've written a general short story, although it (kinda) has some fantasy aspects in it. I'd be really grateful and I'd trade my first born child if you ...

Hi Angel =) I'd be really glad if you could review my story about...well I can't tell you because that would ruin it wouldn't it? Well thank you in advance. ...

Alright, this is just a little short story for my Creative Writing class. It's getting graded so it would be great if you could be as harsh as possible.:)Thanks! August ...

Hi there! This wasn't what I was expecting. As I was reading, I was thinking about complaining about Tommy being a little too Steven Urkel-esque. I thought I knew what ...

Review in red. [quote]We approached the stairs. On the grey walls words were written, cuss words, names, warnings. On the mainland, no one spoke of the island louder than a ...

Guys, this is a published book. You can buy it from Barnes and Noble.

Oooooooh, tension! I think its great. The raw emotion is unsettling and exciting. I want to know more about this story and what's going on in this dude's life. But ...

Wars with no moral limitations. Floods that erase whole states. Bombs seen from hundreds of miles away. Vicious earthquakes that kill with no mercy. Battlefields stretched and stretched and stretched ...

No problem, thanks for your time:)

“The members of Government wish to express their sympathy to the family of William Bennett. We are all sincerely apologetic that an execution was the only way to go about ...

I like it. Your dialoge is really realistic. You really capture what it feels like to leave home for the first time. Just a few minor mistakes like "sentametal" is ...

It's cute. I like your style but it can get tiresome. I don't think you should use that style through out the whole story. Maybe you could just use it ...