CaseySaz

I ran through the trees, not knowing I could run so fast. Thoughts raced through my head. I think they were my thoughts even though I didn't know what they ...

Would you mind reviewing this for me? It's the prologue for another story (which I'm not asking you to read). But I'm warning you, it's a little messed up. And ...

This was short, but sweet. I thought the train of thought was spot-on, very realistic. It really get across the tone I think you're trying to accomplish. When some people ...

Happy birthday to you! And congrats on the new lens. I love the back-lighting on the second picture. I'm a big fan of back lighting, but I haven't taken many ...

This is a prologue to another story, although I think it can stand on it's own, as can the main story. Countless rounds of trial and error did nothing to ...

The idea behind your story interested me from the beginning. The concept of different universes is hard to wrap your mind around; it really makes you think. Here are my ...

The second thing I noticed about this piece is how realistic it sounds. From the little notes in the beginning to the dialogue with the barber, the flow of conversation ...

Hello there! Do you think you could review my short story? Thanks in advance! Casey

Hi there! Do you think you could review this piece for me? Thanks so much! Casey

I wrote this as a sample kind of thing for my creative writing class. Let me know any little thing you dislike about it; I've got a tough skin. Thanks ...

I enjoyed this. I think the idea has a lot of potential, and you did a good job of helping it reach that potential. I think that you could possibly ...

Thanks for the reviews! Lilymoore - I feel the same way about my first sentence, I had actually changed it. My teacher asked to read it over and all I ...

Hello there! Would you mid reviewing my short story? I've got to patch it up for my creative writing class. Thanks! Casey

Hi there! I've written a general kind of short story for my creative writing class and I'd be really happy if you could review it for me:) As for gifts, ...

Thank you times a million! It really means a lot. :D