CarpeOminous

Oh. Oops. Not very computer savvy, sorry I'm posting two replies. I will get this down! I wrote the prologue before I did any of the character devolpment, so I ...

Thank you so much for helping out. Grammar is such an issue with me. :]]

I love how the cell phone was a character even though it remained inanimate - you gave it a character. Very nice work. You show the modern addiction to the ...

I am completely awful at grammer. I tried to go and fix it up but I know there are alot of present tense problems that I most likely missed. Harsh ...

The author is the same one that wrote "The Shadow Children" series. It's about this girl named Dorry who just moved into a new town and knows absolutely nodody. She ...

It needs a little work, it moves too quickly. There is an overuse of the word "sexy" however I absolutely love the "finding the sex kitten" with Hermione's character. Ron ...

I just joined about ten minutes ago and so I'm just saying hello to everyone on the welcoming board. I love writing a little bit of everything, most particularly fantasy ...