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Re: "Tyler, the Messiah," Chapter One
Very strong introduction. Clean grammar and spelling, strong characters, nice use of backstory. I think I would have liked a little more leading up to what is coming next, but ...
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Re: Burned 4.1
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Nov 29, 2015
Few small grammar things... /I don’t care how bad I hurt him./ 'Badly' would fit better here. /“Welcome back, Ms. Patterson.” A familiar voice tells me./ Here, because the part ... -
Re: Burned 4.1
Note: This review has been deleted
Nov 29, 2015
Few small grammar things... /I don’t care how bad I hurt him./ 'Badly' would fit better here. /“Welcome back, Ms. Patterson.” A familiar voice tells me./ Here, because the part ...