Cariad

Caedwyn stood murmuring to Amenorin, speaking softly to his friend when he heard the door to the stable open. By the footsteps, he sensed two people, one might be female. ...

Awww...hate the day of love? How could anyone hate that day? :)

Caedwyn heard the commotion from the stables where his horse, Amenorin, was stabled. Bolting the door behind him, he grabbed his sword from the chair outside the stall and attatched ...

Name: Caedwyn Gender: Male Age: 23 Race: Human Description: Black hair, green eyes, wears a white leather outfit with a black leather baldric and pouches. Personality: Reserved, but easy to ...

Thanks SP. It was actually something I made up on the spot, so I'm a little surprised it turned out so well. And yes, it is dedicated to someone.

Interesting. I couldn't find that many grammatical errors in this, though someone with more experience than me might do better. There were a few parts that seemed choppy, not that ...

Very interesting. I've never seen the elements used in this way before, I'm kinda jealous that it's yours. Very good, it could use some more polishing, perhaps a bit of ...

It's rather funny, I have a really good story that I want to post, the problem is the story is on paper, and it's about 20-odd pages long, front and ...

[pre]You've given me your heart, but I don't know why. You always seem to give me another try. I've made my mistakes, that is true, But the only one for ...

By request, here's my critique. I love the topic. Based on all that is going on in the Middle East, Russia seemed to come out of nowhere. The characters seemed ...

Awesome. lol, I'll just go with the flow for awhile. Name:Atran Gender:Male Dæmon: Akira, Horse, Female Description: Tall, well-built with blonde hair and gray eyes. His only weapon is his ...

Is it too late for me to join?

Bravo. A very good story, with a few touch-ups, one of the most interesting I've read in awhile. Can't wait for more!!!!! ~C

8/10 I like Zim, so that's pretty funny.

There's not much left I can correct that the posts before me haven't already said. I'd like to see more, sounds as if you have a good romance going. Fencing, ...