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Hey! I feel like you could do a lot more with this poem so true, I think that this poem has more potential, it feels as though it should've not ...

thanks guys, and the thread helped a lot, thanks Smylin :D

Hi everyone, I have no idea what I'm doing right now. I've been looking around this site for a while and I rather like it. But I really have no ...

I think it's great. You delivered the message very clearly in simple stanzas, I like it. maybe you could call it Daylight? :p

Don't sulk now, your job is not the worst This guy leaves at bizarre hours, lives to unearth with his shovel he lets the useless morsels disperse until the hollow ...