Candyman

This is a good is written well and its not long witch is a change from some poems witch go into detail about this kind of stuff and is quite ...

Thanks for looking at my story and I am glad you enjoyed it.When I right more tell me if you think theirs something I should do.Keep Calm and Carry On.

Thank you UpAndOut15 for looking at my story and your advice.I think you may be right about naming to many people John so how about Reginald Dwight instead of John ...