CandyVille

The night you stuck that flower in my hair, I took it as a sign, And hoped that it would stay there. I could not lie, And I could not ...

yea.. ok well thanks everybody!

thanks for being critical! i apretiate the help WHOLE lot!

lol! the im gonna get to work on it but i really dont like the next chapters :( but ya know. i was having a writers block this summer when ...

thanks! i appretiate ur suggestions and i'll get toto work on it

Hey everybody!! finally going to get it on!!! but this one's really short so i could use some help! Chapter Three-Dinner "How was your day dear?" Mia's father,Mr.Smith, askedas the ...

Chapter Four- Unsuspecting Two days have passed since the strange encounter. Mia couldn't help thinking about Danny on the way home from school. She knew she would be in huge ...

thanks for your help! i have always been in a hurry when i type this onto youngwriters because either i'm at school or my parents are yelling at me to ...

wow!! thats amazing

okay thanks... thisa i also typed in school so there are many errors.. and i mean, THIS WAS JUST AN IDEA THAT POPPED (oops caps was on) into my head ...

thanks for your help.. i was at school when i typed this and in a hurryso there ar a few mistakes. i might either make this a prolouge ( please ...

i really liked it over all. i don't know who said this but.... it did soud like the end of a story rather than well a begining or a whole ...

thanks! havent had time to type up chapter 3.... ummm.... u see it says in chptr. 1 see in chaptr 1... it says tht central high is where poor ppl ...

thanks!oops didnt see my spelling errors i was in a hurry i typed it during lunch at scholl so yeah..... i have been thinking to stretch it out and i ...

i really like it!!! :)