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Re: Train Wreck Chapter one
Ok i didn't fully read threw this because well the redundance of her name is slightly annoying. Try using "She" instead of her name at the beginning of every sentence. ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: A small extract from my novel.
This has a G rating becuase it is leading towards a sexual scene just so you know * I'm guess you meant R and not G ( or at least ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Untitled dream
What do you think so far? * Note the spaced lines are because I do not have a name for the main male character yet. :roll: “Cora, Cora you’re going ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Bug Zapper
I’m really bored and I came up with this a bit ago. So I thought I might add on to it a bit. Insect: Pa! Pa look! Dad: What is ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me
LOL that was very interesting and preety amusing ^^ though your need to clarify more why you don't like writer so much. for me I'm a big fan if her ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: A Broken Promise.
Very deep poem. Sounds like how I felt about my ex. Promises unkept- They make me weep. Anger because I can't Make you keep it. Disappointment because: I trusted you. ...
Nov 26, 2008
