Cameeno

This poem was intriguing, and I liked how it felt shadowy. But it didn't leave me satisfied. It was disjointed, like you were just putting down random thoughts without any ...

I enjoyed this story, but I have to agree with what Sam said, it was very emotional, but some parts didn't really connect with me. To make your story more ...

I liked the short scentences in this poem, as it showed the overall theme of time passing by quickly. But the poem didn't grab my attention. "Eternal, Forever, Time" are ...