Callista

Author's note: I had written a 'sort-of' first chapter for this series, but my co-author and I changed a few details so here is the official first chapter. I write ...

This sounds like it has potential :D Let me just give you a few suggestions. Who is the voice of the forest? If this is the first part of the ...

Hi! You gave me such a nice review on my demon brothers story that I thought I'd do the same for you! I liked this first chapter. It's a lot ...

Wow, a sad christmas story... :( I couldn't find much wrong with this, either. I got kind of confused with the constant jumping around, though, and the paragraphs could be ...

As always, Silas made his rounds through the house that night. It was now just a little after ten thirty, meaning it was plenty dark outside. And as always, he ...

Skrain looked out the window from his room on the second floor of his house, glaring defiantly out at the rest of the world that was always mocking him with ...

Author's note: Thanks for all the reviews, guys! However I just thought I'd make one little comment, since there's one thing in common all the reviews seem to have - ...