Calligraphy

Hi Titanic! So I have always wanted to hear what it was like on Gales side. This is a pretty good start considering I want to read more. I did ...

Hi silentpages! That sounds really hard and I think you did pretty well considering. Is this for Azila's contest? Anyway, I really liked this, and as you read my review ...

Hi xDudettex! So like Borntobeawriter I suggest you recap what has happened in the previous chapters. It will help you get more reviews on later chapters and it will help ...

Hey Soulkana, thanks for giving one of your Bamboozle teammates something to review. XD O.K. this isn't too long to be a prologue. In fact I have read page long ...

Hi ginger! I hope you are enjoying it around the site so far. This is pretty good, but like everything it can be improved. I think if you just expanded ...

Hi Dcmc! So, I really liked this, but it took me a while to get into it. You have a big info dump at the beginning of this and that ...

Hi blood. I am actually very intrigued by this and I do know what wants to happen next. So I say keep working with this idea! My biggest problem with ...

Hi Dream! As you may have noticed the more chapters you add to a novel the less reviews you get. Right? That is because a lot of the time people ...

Hi Stella! I really liked this because I love the story. You are correct though. You have a few info dumps in here. Especially the history in the beginning. The ...

Hi again Birdy, I hope you do get at your recital. It is 12:51 so you won't be there yet. But anyway, you say this chapter sucks, but I think ...

Hey Birdy. I suppose I should review this because I did promise even though I hate reviewing your stuff. ;) First of all I think you don't sound too much ...

Right now, because it is review day, I am working on getting as many people reviewed as possible, so I am only going to review one poem right now. But ...

Hi fries! I think some punctuation would really help this. Complete thoughts are hard to distinguish without them especially because you seemed to ask questions, but there was no question ...

Hi dispatch, I really like this poem, but like you said you do need to work on your rhythm some. Getting all of these things takes a little bit of ...

Hi Micki! I am trying to do Azila's contest too, but I haven't written anything as good as this. Anyway once I started to get to the meat of this ...