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Re: Acceptance
Nitpicks: 1. "Room 310? I'm going there, actually," she said. Liam was relieved. "Oh, cool. Thanks, this is my first day here, so I'm a little lost with all the ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
9/10 It cracked me up.
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Mary Jane Trial by Fire 5
Hi SuicideCrusader! This piece was posted a while ago and I see it still doesn't have any reviews! Right now most YWSers are busy with school and other things, but ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Fear
As you are getting back into writing regularly I am getting back into reviewing poetry. So please bear with me and my short unworthy review. Anyhow honestly the first stanza ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*
Sarah Coppenbarger| Alice's Room I stared at the girl. Maybe she was crazy. Who else would: 1. Think that the Ancients were real. 2. Suggest that I of all people ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*
Once again sorry for the bad post, I have to leave for school in a few minutes. Sarah Coppenbarger | Alice's room I jumped straight up as Alice shouted. I ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*
Sarah Coppenbarger | Alice's room I knocked at the door softly, but my mind still buzzed with what I had seen just moments before. The king was obviously distressed, why ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: My Imagination is Evil
Hi 32. Alright so this is a pretty short piece of prose so this review may not be too long. Also, though it is under romance, it isn't the typical ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Alison in Wonderland (Redo)
Hi Boo. One of the hardest things to take a good picture of, at least in my opinion, is a person. You've done really well. But, I'm afraid to say ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*
Name: Sarah Coppenbarger Age: 22 Gender: F From: Dregovia, but she only remembers living in Ugya. (Note: I just made up this name...) Appearance: I hope this isn't considered a ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Pinned - Chapter One
Hi Sparks! This was really good. I am afraid I won't be able to help you much because I mostly have praise. : ) Good things: 1. Your characters were ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Clyde's Adventure
Hi Paws. This piece is very short so I don't have a ton to say about it. But I will get right to the review. The first thing I want ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: SUgar-Coated: Prologue
Hi amiemalamie. I found this prologue by looking in Novels & Novellas. So before I start my review I would like to say that I love your novel name: Sugar ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Best Films You've Ever Seen
Every Disney movie ever made except for Aladdin and the Little Mermaid. I couldn't have said it better.
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Best Films You've Ever Seen
Well now I know where I'll come when I can't think of anything to request from the library a week before movie night. XD
Jul 21, 2011
