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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Acceptance

    Nitpicks: 1. "Room 310? I'm going there, actually," she said. Liam was relieved. "Oh, cool. Thanks, this is my first day here, so I'm a little lost with all the ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You

    9/10 It cracked me up.

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Mary Jane Trial by Fire 5

    Hi SuicideCrusader! This piece was posted a while ago and I see it still doesn't have any reviews! Right now most YWSers are busy with school and other things, but ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fear

    As you are getting back into writing regularly I am getting back into reviewing poetry. So please bear with me and my short unworthy review. Anyhow honestly the first stanza ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*

    Sarah Coppenbarger| Alice's Room I stared at the girl. Maybe she was crazy. Who else would: 1. Think that the Ancients were real. 2. Suggest that I of all people ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*

    Once again sorry for the bad post, I have to leave for school in a few minutes. Sarah Coppenbarger | Alice's room I jumped straight up as Alice shouted. I ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*

    Sarah Coppenbarger | Alice's room I knocked at the door softly, but my mind still buzzed with what I had seen just moments before. The king was obviously distressed, why ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Imagination is Evil

    Hi 32. Alright so this is a pretty short piece of prose so this review may not be too long. Also, though it is under romance, it isn't the typical ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Alison in Wonderland (Redo)

    Hi Boo. One of the hardest things to take a good picture of, at least in my opinion, is a person. You've done really well. But, I'm afraid to say ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Ancient | Started *dead*

    Name: Sarah Coppenbarger Age: 22 Gender: F From: Dregovia, but she only remembers living in Ugya. (Note: I just made up this name...) Appearance: I hope this isn't considered a ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Pinned - Chapter One

    Hi Sparks! This was really good. I am afraid I won't be able to help you much because I mostly have praise. : ) Good things: 1. Your characters were ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Clyde's Adventure

    Hi Paws. This piece is very short so I don't have a ton to say about it. But I will get right to the review. The first thing I want ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: SUgar-Coated: Prologue

    Hi amiemalamie. I found this prologue by looking in Novels & Novellas. So before I start my review I would like to say that I love your novel name: Sugar ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Best Films You've Ever Seen

    Every Disney movie ever made except for Aladdin and the Little Mermaid. I couldn't have said it better.

    Jul 26, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Best Films You've Ever Seen

    Well now I know where I'll come when I can't think of anything to request from the library a week before movie night. XD

    Jul 21, 2011


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