Calligraphy

Elizabeth I sat on the window seat and watched the old lady. She had been busy all morning setting out the table, the chairs, and games. Her hair was curled ...

This is very good. It pulled sadness from me because a lot of the time I think we see each other not as people, but as how we want to ...

Thank you BlueAfrica for telling me something I can improve on! When you said this I went back and looked at a few of the poems I have written recently, ...

Note: Every other syllable is accented. Some tell me it is better to have loved and lost Than to have never loved before But I think my love must be ...

Hi Jennyr this novel looks pretty interesting, but piece is really long - over 7,000 words! That is probably why you haven't gotten any reviews. People usually don't have enough ...

Red: I fixed your grammar or punctuation. Blue: You can/should take these parts out. Today I 'll be heading to Abigail's house , and I gotta say I am pretty ...

Hi Carlito so I really liked this, but there are places you can improve. In grammar and in content. My biggest problem with this is that, to me at least, ...

Nitpicks. 1. Whoa, over-load of information in this first chapter. Even if you did it cleverly through the younger dragons asking questions I'm still never going to be able to ...

Nitpicks: 1. Every writer has that word they just have to use over and over again. Mine is 'suddenly', I manage to use it in almost every paragraph when I'm ...

We seem to have a lot of male characters... Usually storybooks are overloaded with female characters! This is a real feat, but some female characters would be nice. - Calli

Thanks for clarifying Skinsy! XD

O.K. so I have a question about the angels. Have the angles just died or have then been doing their job for a while? Also, if they have been doing ...

I'll finish soon! Name: April Anne Zappa Age: She died at the age of 12. Gender Female Species: Guardian Angel Appearance: When she had died she had just started to ...

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Note: There is one swear word in it. My dad hates cats. He has always hated cats, and he always will hate cats. He complains about them all the time. ...