Calligraphy

O.K. so first of all I will feel really harsh reviewing this because it is about your Grandma and from the heart. Second of all I would get rid of ...

I feel really awkward saying this, but the girl on right sides chest looks like a dudes. Or at least to me it does...

O.K. so, I like the second drawing best because it is kind of my style of drawing. But, I think you should lightly shade in the branches behind the leaves ...

Hi james, (by the way that is one of my favorite names. Just saying) welcome to YWS. I hope you get as much inspiration here as I do. Scripts huh? ...

Hi allicat. I am also a cat as you can see. A very tired cat. I am also really excited you found this site! It is the right place to ...

I am assuming this is in the form of villanelle? I have never read a poem in this form before so I am sorry, but I can't review it. I ...

Well, from what I know (don't take this too seriously though because I don't really know for sure) coming of age would be considered going to balls. If you went ...

I really like this poem, but the way it seems now just seems choppy. The rhythm isn't strengthen by the short lines at all. I know I am pushing my ...

Hi flower, I will be your reviewer today. I am a bit nervous because well you have the reviewer badge and all and you are a much better reviewer than ...

I am the only thing that comes out, but then a bomb haha. -insert coin-

You lifted me up towards the sky. Pure light healing me, I am not sure what this has to do with the poem. I am confused about its meaning. Gently ...

Charlie Rae Browen – 15 – Poseidon I walked back to my cabin to change out of my sweaty clothes. I was trying to decide if I should get my ...

I am going to post about after the game. We don't need to describe the whole thing...

I am posting about meeting Luna so could you not post about her? Thanks

Charlie Rae Browen Oh how I loved volley ball. I smiled as Jessie served. I dived for the ball hitting it just as I hit the ground.