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This poem is really good, though, like all writing, it can be improved. The first thing I noticed when reading this poem was the short lines. Someone once told me ...

Shall I throw pennies in a well, making magic wishes? or shall I toss my dreams , I only add this comma because you had one before. I made the ...

There is more than one lonesome dove. I mean there is the rest of the series in the movie version. I have never read the book... A. S.

Desert Strohschein I put my arm around her and pulled her close it was all I could do. Spirit, this isn’t nothing I whispered. I thought of a little girl ...

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my adrenaline rushes this line is awkward. Instead, you could try something like: "I feel a rush of adrenaline", or "My adrenaline levels skyrocket." But those are just ideas. I ...

the silent tears drip down my face When tears drip it means they are falling off. But, you are talking about when tears run down your face not drip off. ...

A spiral of bone, turning in on itself over and over again, I don't like this line I already was picturing it that way and tons of people saw this. ...

Once again, I don't want to see the smiley face at the end of your poem (if it is part of the poem.). Nor, the font color. I liked this ...

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