Calligraphy

Banned for being lazy.

I would love

Z - Zillabongium Yellow O.K. I will do.... Movies. A - American Grafitti

This is a great place, called Will Review For Food , for asking for reviews. People are begging to review you. But, the best way to get more reviews is, ...

candy corn

banned for being sexist!

That is awesome Gryphon! hahaa you should be a Ninja! A. S. P.S. Awesome makeup mixup!

More nitpicks: The coffee shop, You need a space here. Esnatzen, was empty when Seres walked in; the moss green carpet shocking his feet. He glanced around, eyes resting on ...

Well, just play with it. I was thinking they can't control when they go in or come out they just sort of do. I am not sure about the boundary ...

black

banned for making the same mistake I make all the time XD

Un-fairytalish... hmm don't have an easy happy ending. Try to keep your ideas really original, make old ideas your own. Make all characters have faults. ummm well, I kind have ...

evil

Much more description!

banned for saying Ranger Hawk only has three stars when she clearly has four!