Calligraphy

Hi 13, again! So, from your P.M. I guessed that you had updated this again just as many times as you have sent me updates? I'm just going to review ...

Hi volleyball! I'm back for another review since you edited. Okay this is so much better than before it isn't even funny. When I first started writing I was horrible ...

Hi Dhiren, like AngelKnight I agree that this sounds a lot like a summary. If you are planning on making this into a fantasy novel though it sounds very interesting ...

Hi Boo! Okay I just have to first point out I love your username. :D From my glance over I saw that Greena has given you some good advice on ...

Ehh, haven't all girls been in this same situation? It is very depressing. This is a really short piece so my review probably won't be too long. First, like Becca ...

This is very good ScarlettFire! So good I'm afraid I don't really have any places where you can improve. I think your repetitiveness really worked. I really felt the emotion. ...

Hi 13, okay so first I want to say I really agree with Vox. Beef things up add more detail. I really think this story line seems promising so far; ...

Hi MJ, though I don't really like the song Won't Go Home Without You by Maroon 5 I do happen to like your take on it. There wasn't really any ...

Hi WaitingForLife. So, all I can say is that I am really glad you have an 18+ rating on this, because it is on a rather foul subject matter. In ...

I've made the head of the angels! Now I just have to figure out how I'm supposed to guide these people!

Name: Eva Lula Lade Age: 27 Gender Female Species: Head Of The Angels Appearance: She has raven black hair, very pale white skin, bright blue eyes, and delicate features. She ...

Same here, I just can't get them right no matter how hard I try! But I'll think about maybe making some other characters. Do they have to be females?

It isn't possible we'd be able to start this yet, right? Because if not I can't wait to get writing. :)

Hi kasimkaey! If you want a serious novel forum you should check out this Novel Workshop forum. Be sure to read the rules first. I know it has been a ...

Hi WinterBloom, I love your user name! It sounds so pretty! Umm that makes me sound very girly; I'm not. If there is one thing this site will do it ...