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  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Hi ilyah! Ultraviolet gave you a few tips and she is right. Don't be afraid to ask! Plus, some of getting around the site just takes time. A tip I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: It's my turn

    Right now, because it is review day, I am working on getting as many people reviewed as possible, so I am only going to review one poem right now. But ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Human Life

    Hi fries! I think some punctuation would really help this. Complete thoughts are hard to distinguish without them especially because you seemed to ask questions, but there was no question ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Morbid Circus

    Thanks for the reviews guys. *edits*

    May 1, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Narration for my animation thesis.

    Hi dispatch, I really like this poem, but like you said you do need to work on your rhythm some. Getting all of these things takes a little bit of ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: For Rory

    Hi Micki! I am trying to do Azila's contest too, but I haven't written anything as good as this. Anyway once I started to get to the meat of this ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Prologue)

    Hey skins, so I can see you have a lot of chapters up, I just want to let you know I haven't read the storyline or any of the other ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Warriors: Plain and Simple

    Hi stori, I was into these books for a while and I really liked them. Because this is so short I don’t have a lot to say but here goes: ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Archive Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed

    Great posts, interesting twist XD

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS group photo!

    I would love to be a black cat. XD

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Morbid Circus

    A smile smeared on my frowning face White powder covers my dark skin Inky gunk, so thick it doesn’t smear when tears well up. I am covered in pinks, yellows, ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Archive Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed

    Great posts :)

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Agony in a receptacle.

    Hi Nihasa! I hope you are enjoying it around the site so far. I am not sure what this is meant to be. I have the feeling of an introduction ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Screencaps

    Haha I love these!

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Only Natural

    Hi, Tori, I just want to say right now that I haven't done a good review in a while and I am trying to get back into the zone. This ...

    Apr 29, 2011


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind