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Re: Hello!
Hi ilyah! Ultraviolet gave you a few tips and she is right. Don't be afraid to ask! Plus, some of getting around the site just takes time. A tip I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: It's my turn
Right now, because it is review day, I am working on getting as many people reviewed as possible, so I am only going to review one poem right now. But ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Human Life
Hi fries! I think some punctuation would really help this. Complete thoughts are hard to distinguish without them especially because you seemed to ask questions, but there was no question ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Morbid Circus
Thanks for the reviews guys. *edits*
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Narration for my animation thesis.
Hi dispatch, I really like this poem, but like you said you do need to work on your rhythm some. Getting all of these things takes a little bit of ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: For Rory
Hi Micki! I am trying to do Azila's contest too, but I haven't written anything as good as this. Anyway once I started to get to the meat of this ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Prologue)
Hey skins, so I can see you have a lot of chapters up, I just want to let you know I haven't read the storyline or any of the other ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Warriors: Plain and Simple
Hi stori, I was into these books for a while and I really liked them. Because this is so short I don’t have a lot to say but here goes: ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Great posts, interesting twist XD
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
I would love to be a black cat. XD
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Morbid Circus
A smile smeared on my frowning face White powder covers my dark skin Inky gunk, so thick it doesn’t smear when tears well up. I am covered in pinks, yellows, ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Great posts :)
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Agony in a receptacle.
Hi Nihasa! I hope you are enjoying it around the site so far. I am not sure what this is meant to be. I have the feeling of an introduction ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: YWS Screencaps
Haha I love these!
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Only Natural
Hi, Tori, I just want to say right now that I haven't done a good review in a while and I am trying to get back into the zone. This ...
Apr 29, 2011
