Calligraphy

Hey Soulkana, thanks for giving one of your Bamboozle teammates something to review. XD O.K. this isn't too long to be a prologue. In fact I have read page long ...

Hi ginger! I hope you are enjoying it around the site so far. This is pretty good, but like everything it can be improved. I think if you just expanded ...

Hi Dcmc! So, I really liked this, but it took me a while to get into it. You have a big info dump at the beginning of this and that ...

Hey pup! *high-fives* You are on the right team! Anyway for joining right before such a busy time you have certainly learned fast. I didn't start reviewing like you are ...

Come on guys, I know you want to review for your teams but still, post!

O.K. so the first one is the best, then the second one, then the third one. Because I don't really have any nitpicks for these I will give you my ...

There once was a bear called Pooh Up his nose a bee once flew It buzzed and it stung Until out if flung With a loud, slimy ‘Achoo’ No, this ...

Unlike lilly I would choose ice. Both do suffice in destroying things. Even though I love the way fire looks and I almost chose it I finally decided that ice ...

Hi blood. I am actually very intrigued by this and I do know what wants to happen next. So I say keep working with this idea! My biggest problem with ...

Great work nate! I think that in each picture it improved slightly. Now the reviews are just rolling in. I think the teams were such a good idea!

Thanks for the reviews guys! I will edit AFTER review day XD

Hi Dream! As you may have noticed the more chapters you add to a novel the less reviews you get. Right? That is because a lot of the time people ...

Hi Stella! I really liked this because I love the story. You are correct though. You have a few info dumps in here. Especially the history in the beginning. The ...

Hi again Birdy, I hope you do get at your recital. It is 12:51 so you won't be there yet. But anyway, you say this chapter sucks, but I think ...

Hey Birdy. I suppose I should review this because I did promise even though I hate reviewing your stuff. ;) First of all I think you don't sound too much ...