Calligraphy

Would you review my poem for word choice? It is called Today is one of those days Thankyou

I am here to review like you asked, and I really wanted to read it anyway. red - the subject of all the other colors. Blue - General comments. pink ...

Hmmm for some reason I like how the rose isn't the focus, though it would have looked better the other way. Sometimes there is beauty in things that aren't beautiful. ...

~Michel~ Blake and I swooped down into camp. We hadn't been gone for too long, and after our kiss I had gotten Blake to practice flying some more. She still ...

I will comment on the pictures you took. 1. This is beautiful. It is a bit blurry, but I think that gives it a nice affect. I don't like the ...

Thanks for the comment even though there wasn't any advice.

Well, I am here to review like you asked :) red - the subject of all the other colors. Blue - General comments. pink - grammar (taking away words, adding ...

austenite - done. That was really good. Flower~Child - done. Your story was also good, but I can't really tell because it was so short.

I am here to review like you asked. First I must say that the title isn't very intriguing I would have never clicked on it unless you asked. Second I ...

Well, I like how it is now.... I know some of you didn't, but I write things for myself not for other people. Today is one of those days When ...

So, this is me Arahnia . . . I just wanted to let everyone know that "Calligraphy" is actually me... sigh.